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Edited by theUSpopulation:
7/26/2014 5:20:04 PM
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Off Topic: What do you guys think of my first photoshop?
[b][u][i]PLEASE READ:[/i][/u][/b] This thread has nothing to do with the Destiny beta. I posted this thread over a year ago in the offtopic section with the #feedback. Now that their is a main thread with #feedback, a glitch occurred were I am technically in both categories. This cannot be fixed by me at the time. Sorry for any confusion.
Feedback would be much appreciated!
[u]Edit[/u]: Thanks for the feedback every one! I did not expect this thread to be so big!
Once summer ends, I would be taking a course in digital photography where we spend a good portion of the year using Photoshop. So it is good for a head start.
I spent about another hour on it using some of your feedback (about as much as I could have done in an hour.) There is still a lot I would like to fix (such as the beam of light and the blur in the foreground) but it certainty looks better.
Original images:
[spoiler][quote]City (Dubai):
[url]http://i.jootix.com/o/Jootix--e5c6e4c760.jpg[/url][/quote]
[quote]Space:
[url]http://topwalls.net/wallpapers/2012/03/planets-1800x2880.jpg[/url][/quote]
[/spoiler]
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good, but not this good http://i.imgur.com/JzbdfXM.png?1
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Makes me horny
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Looks fake
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1 ReplyLooks photoshopped
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Nice job. Looks good.
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Looks great, the realistic city with cartoony style space is kinda throwing me off though. Regardless, great job, especially for your first!
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Great job, looks like you'll do well in that class! :)
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1 ReplyOh, I forgot to mention! I was born in Dubai.
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It's good for a first photoshop. It's not great but if you can do that now, you'll only get better. And then what looks like a screenshot from a late ps2/early ps3 cg cutscene will look -blam!-ing jawdroppingly amazing.
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Needs moar lens flare.
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Holy crap amazing you should be a digital artist
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That would be an awesome city to live in.
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Holy shit thats good
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Holy Blam This is pretty good
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Very nice, reminds me of the first Halo 3: ODST Level and that Halo Reach level were you fly the Falcon during the night. What you think of [url=http://www.bungie.net/7_My-first-go-at-Photoshop/en/Forum/Post?id=64375295#referred-Photoshop]my first Photoshop[/url]?
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Nice picture. Where's your camera? (Joke)
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That looks really good, which surprised me.
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Edited by Cultmeister: 7/9/2013 3:21:52 PMlies. i demand to see your spaceship immediately.
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Edgy.
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That's terrific! Great job on your first!
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Actually that's really good, even more so for a first photoshop. Far better than mine, or my first few for that matter. But since you asked for feedback, I'll be that guy. 2 Things wrong with it from a brief look: The left planet/jupiter is colored yet everything else is black and white. It's not really the focus to the image so I don't see why it's colored/ Blurry background stars. You could have picked a better star field than that, or made your own using Filter > Add Noise, then pressing CTRL+L to alter levels to change the amount of 'stars' and set the layer to Overlay (I think it's overlay, might be screen).
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Edited by Enlightened One: 7/9/2013 1:41:48 AM8 out of 10
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...incredible
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6 RepliesI am Mitochondrion. I said "it's terrible and you should go kill yourself" I was joking just to clarify.
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Sweet! Could you link a bigger one for a desktop background? That looks awesome.
