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Edited by Aleroth Aloki: 7/15/2013 2:13:33 PM
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Spread your wings. (Fan Fiction Contest)

Ladies and gentlemen, the time has come for us writers to take center stage for a time. The Black Garden as well as our friends over in Arts and Stuff are going to host a contest that is solely devoted to writers. The rules are simple. For any who wish to enter, you are tasked with writing a short little anecdote that is to have a maximum of 300 words. The location for this piece of work is to be located in the picture provided above. The deadline for entering is this Sunday(14th) at midnight. For any who wish to enter, please submit your stories by placing them in the comments. Judging will be done in two phases. The first phase will consist of a Panel of both groups reading over each story and deciding which seven are the best of the best. Once the first stage is complete, we shall hand it over to you, the audience, to decide who is ranked number one as lore master. The Winner of this contest shall receive a print of the Buried City signed by the Destiny writing team. Good luck and Be Brave.

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  • Edited by THE CHIEF64: 7/13/2013 12:54:48 AM
    [b]The Buried City.[/b] Once, long ago, this was a great and magnificent city. Over a hundred years ago this city was a home to thousands of citizens. The city was well known before it became lost and forgotten, but through the sands of time it was. War started to spread throughout the galaxy, and like a deadly virus soon it infected those within the city, now forgotten from our world. One by one the citizens started to leave, abandoning their hope thinking that somewhere else they may find safety. I knew that there was no safe place, and I would rather die in my home awaiting the inevitable end that was upon us all. As time went on, there became less and less of us. What was once a mighty people soon became a few hundred, then a few dozen. Until it was only I that remained here in the city, I don’t know if the ones who left became lucky in their search for safety, but I never regretted my choice to stay…. Soon they came, the creatures from another world beyond our rim, seeking the resources we had. They tried to wipe us out, even into extinction. The armies came and attacked the city, I can still see them in my nightmares, marching their forces, destroying all in their path. As I write my recollection of these events I don’t know if any will ever know of the truth, or even seek to find it. If one day the remnants of this city are to be discovered and excavated then you can find the truth buried in the heart of the city center. Pathways through the darkness….Per audacia ad astra [i]I await your arrival….Destiny awaits you.[/i]

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    • [b]Today's the day.... I thought. As I got out of bed, I felt more joyful this morning then any other because today's the day I become a Guardian. I go in my bathroom, get cleaned and finally get dressed into my uniform. I set off to meet my friend Lucas. I was walking to meet him, when out of nowhere, a punch came flying my way. Yep, today was a mixture of emotions. It was Callum, popular with everyone, even the teachers. He was about to hit me again but Lucas was there to stop him. Lucas was there to protect me, ever since we where kids he was always there like a guardian angel. Well, after the incident we went to the hall of honours, which is directly under The Traveler. The hall of honours is a magnificent building, it's job is to honour the fallen Guardians and keep up moral in the darkest of days. I can tell you it kept me going through the years, most of the time it was when we had to go through the rigorous training. We collected our honours of General Cleeson, we then sat back down and rose has Guardians of the City. Alarms rang.. ..Couple of hours later, we where in the battlefield, with the rest of our faction, FWC, our aim was too take out a platoon of fallen. Lucas spots a fallen separate form his group. Lucas being the Titan he is goes rushing in. I yell "nooooo!", the words screeches through air. He looks only it's too late. A Devil Walker blast him with a canon. ....That's the day I became Legend RIP Private Lucas Conway. The Brave Titan. [/b] I tried my best. Hope you like.

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      • Hey, if people would comment on mine to let me know what they thought, I'd really appreciate it. I know there are some spelling and grammar mistakes. I blame auto-correct.

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      • Question, can our main character be a bad guy? Ex. Fallen, Dreg, The Hive???

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        • Edited by KelseyHunter: 7/13/2013 1:04:41 AM
          I stood, alone, in the courtyard. Orange sand swirling around my boots. I pulled up my hood, letting my cloak catch the wind. I checked my sniper for ammo, and dropped it when I discovered it was empty. Blood was running down my left arm, and pain stabbed at my chest, but I chose to ignore it. I took off my mask, and placed it under the large cover. I pulled out my revolver, looking over the dead body's of the intruders I killed. This land was once ours, but these... heartless heathens killed us for it. I crouched on one knee, saying a quick prayer to the traveler. I heard footsteps, heavy and clumsy. Reinforcements. I sighed and stood back up, looking at the many who wish to kill me. I coughed, blood filling my mouth. I looked at the old buildings that surrounded me, wondering what it looked like when humans were occupying it. Kids laughing and mothers scolding them for touching everything they saw, and fathers hard at work to earn money. What peace. "I am the protector of the last city." I growled, determination and anger rising in my chest. "You may try all you want to kill the humans, but, as long as I'm still here, and as long as I can move a finger or toe, you will never succeed!" I shouted, stamping my foot to stir up the sand, letting it rise like an explosion. I stood proud, glaring at the pathetic Cabal in front of me. "I will never give up." I said as I launched myself at them, feeling the spirits of all the dead people with me, supporting me.

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          • Edited by LinsleyBoxill: 7/13/2013 12:57:30 AM
            4 cloaked figures known as Guardians slowly walked making their way across the sandy desert the sun beating down on them. They had been at it for almost 2 weeks now not seeing much except for the small rodents that manage to survive in the intense heat. A sand storm they had been tracking for days was almost upon them so they decided to make camp in a nearby abandoned city, a city ravage by a battle from long ago buried beneath time and sand. They made it to a small road way cracked and broken that would lead them straight in to the heart of the [i][b]Buried City[/b][/i]. They made their way in to the eastern entrance of the desolate city checking their navigation maps for a location they could set up camp for the night. They chose a rundown building that seemed at one time to be an apartment building. The picture hadn't been updated in years so their hopes were not high that the building even still existed. But they had been lucky as it still stood even though it had been riddled with holes and the pant sand blasted off over the years. They climbed up the chipped and broken stair case leading to the main entrance and inside the main lobby. They set up a defensive perimeter sending Hunter on the roof with a high powered Sniper the roof where she could pose as a long range killer and lookout. The Warlock was the point man for the medium range targets picking off anything that came into his range while he had the cover of the main lobby desk. For the enemy's that were unfortunate enough to get within range of close combat they had to deal with the two titans quartered at the left and right of the Warlock. They were ready for anything that might try to attack.

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            • Edited by Admiral Bunny: 7/13/2013 7:46:21 PM
              Not much of a writer but here is mine. Good luck to all. The Buried City was once a sprawling trade hub for anything entering or leaving Earth. That of course all changed when they started their attack on us. We thought of course that being so close to Earth that we would be safe. How wrong were we, how wrong. They came from what seemed from outta nowhere. The battle for the city lasted for weeks for we threw everything we had to stop our enemy for if they beat us here then Earth would be next. Coming back here brings so many painful memories. The city is just but a shell of what it once was. What was once covered with the clamor of trade and peacefulness is now all but quite with the exception of the screeches of the Fallen and their allies. With blood still fresh on my gloves from my first of what will be many encounters I will clear this city out. The one memory that keeps me pushing is also the memory that has changed my life. In our final hours of retreat we were all loading up in ships to go ahead to Earth and prepare our defenses there. Minutes before our take off that’s when I first saw it, the Orb heading to Earth, the Orb that carried the Traveler. He gave us hope and is still giving me the hope I need. The screeches of the Fallen are coming closer. The sound of battle calls me and my brothers as the dark abyss calls for our enemies.

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            • Edited by Wiiwillrockyoup: 7/13/2013 12:42:10 AM
              [b][i]Seven of us gazed upon the timeworn metropolis that lay on our horizon. Some of us sobbed at the sight of our home devolved and decimated into a smoldering pile of charred tears and dreams, and some of us stood valiantly on the edge of all the destruction. The city was first buried in the ashes of the fallen, but whatever clawed out of all of the pestilence surrounding them found nothing more than the desert, which swallowed up whatever dead memories called these ruins "home". Whole buildings had been reduced to shards that pierced the heavens, whole blocks had been ripped apart and cast about the town, whole families had been torn apart in the midst of chaos unfolding. The sea of dust that had encroached upon this land had eroded the faces and legacy of countless sculptures of the citizens of this burg, and blistering desert winds had shattered the remains. My comrades and I picked up our rifles, our supplies, and our spirits, as we all entered the Buried Hamlet of Madrigal, the shelter of the sands. The road was glittering with the ever-burning embers cast off from the smoldering balconies of flaming penthouses. Fallen towers litter the desert, along with the deteriorated remains of every man who had ever lived in this place. An amber hue reflected off the the slivers of glassed high-rises, as we traversed through molten highways and decrepit boons. We finally reached our vantage point right in the center of the city, and laid out our supplies, then my partner set up the explosive charges. We all stood there, staring back at where we were hours before, and felt a sense of euphoria as the blackened masses of steel and sweat vaporized around us, and as we burst into flames with it.[/i][/b] My entry. If you like it, or think it's horrid, let me know. Also, thank you for this opportunity, and challenge of artistic skill.

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              • Edited by Cellowned: 7/15/2013 4:23:38 AM
                [b][u][i]“Rocks”[/i][/u][/b] “You’re sure we’re in the right place?” “I’m sure.” “I don’t know how considering we’re in the [b]MIDDLE OF A DESERT SANDST[/b]-“ “[i]Quiet![/i] We could be surrounded by Cabal without even knowing it!" "Yeah yeah. Why are we here again?" "You heard that Fireteam back at the Tower. There's some kind of kick-blam!- weapon out here. But its apparently well-hidden and well-guarded." "In a sandstorm this dense, two feet in front of us is well-hi- [b]OUCH![/b] -Blam!-ing boulders..." "Chad, I don't think those are boulders…” Slowly, three Cabal rose from the dust on massive legs. Each stood to be at least 20 feet high. "That mystery weapon better be worth it!" exclaimed the Hunter as he dove out from under a Cabal's shield just before it cracked the hardened clay beneath it. "Where the hell is it!?" "Lets focus on [i]not dying[/i] right now!" As the Warlock began firing shots into the monsters' thick armor, Chad rolled to his feet and dashed into the dust. Pulling out [i]Closing Time[/i], he whirled around and looked through his infrared scope, scanning a Cabal for a weak point. As it swung at Brian, he noticed a white-hot point on its back. He shot it, the beast slowed a little, then fell on its face. "I found a weak spot!" "Perfect!" shouted Brian as he dodged another massive arm. "A little help please?" The Hunter ran behind the last Cabal and shot into the back of its head, doing little damage. "Hey tin-can! Your mother was a garbage disposal!" The Cabal planted its foot on the Hunter's cape with surprising speed. As it began to raise its shield, Brian blasted the back of the Cabal with an energy ball, rendering it into a two-story paperweight. "Lets not touch any more rocks." "Got it."

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              • As the lone guardian trudged through the sands of the ancient red planet, he beheld the marvel that had ignited his quest. Before the man stood a necropolis, the remains of a grand city constructed in technological splendor. The spires of archaic buildings glimmered in the light of the distant sun. Intrigued, the human strode towards an exposed aperture, treading confidently over Martian fauna. Upon entry, the guardian felt a flurry of images enter his mind, echoes of the events that lead to the city's downfall. Screams pierced the warlock's ears as he stepped closer to a charred bed frame. Succumbing to the antediluvian shrieks, he kneeled down on the ground, clasping his sweating temples. As the wails subsided, he noticed a slight sparkle in the ash around the bed frame. Upon investigation, he found a bronze key with an inscription engraved on the side in an alien tongue. Paying it no heed, the guardian began to look for a keyhole nearby. On a slight bulge in the wall, he found the fissure that he sought. Without remorse, the man twisted the key, expectant of rewards. A basement of sorts was now open to him. The guardian walked down, activating his Ghost for illumination. What he found was far more macabre than he could have possibly imagined. Bones of human infantry lined the walls, positioned in such a way as to indicate physical detention. All valuable possessions had been stripped from them. A feeling of dread entered into the warlock's thoughts as he contemplated what had happened here. Uneasy, the guardian exited the basement, content to leave empty-handed. The lone guardian trekked out of the building and away from the city. He boarded his ship and headed for Earth, curiosity tickling his imagination. This adventure called for a fire team.

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                • Edited by E Sword of LORD: 7/13/2013 12:59:26 AM
                  Gazing at the difference between the wreckage of what once was evidently a beautiful city-square I couldn't help but wonder... Who could make such as this? Contemplating further scenic beauty ahead the task of finding the data pads skillfully hidden amidst the structure continued. "Seven! over here!" Looking over I saw seven being waved to by forge, one of the longest lived and serving officers of the day. Another data pad found. Would these help us find/ make greater beauty? As sevens "help bot" scanned and transmitted the data to the group a new sound was heard. Unmistakeable... Prepping for the oncoming conflict I note the additional information feed-out on my armor / health condition and ammo as battle hardened as a quicksilver lightning in my nerves and reflexes. "Seven! Get ready! Four arms incoming!" "Forge! We NEED to find these pads!" "I know keep looking and stay sharp! We have enough dead Heroes so stick close to the group." Looking about at some of the newer and more anxious faces I sigh, and reflexively relax to the mindset of faster movements and environmental adjustment, noting along with it that my end result for not needing this mindset was just as lost as the pads we're looking for. Finishing my pre-battle prep I return to scanning for seven , the only out of sight teammate. "Seven! Get down here NOW! We have incoming!" "..urrgh!" "Seven..." "..." "." "...almost... GOTCHA! Found the last pad! Lets get out of here!" "Nice timing Seven..." "You know me! Always in the nick of time!" Reading over the data coming in over the link I couldn't help but laugh. Who could imagine a platypus causing that... "Ready the force!"

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                  • Edited by Destiny Author: 7/13/2013 12:45:44 AM
                    Gotta rework this-my bad!

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                  • As the crimson dust settled, Kohl wiped it from his face mask in order to keep watch of the Cabal fortress that lied a mere mile from him. These dust storms had become more and more frequent on the dry cracked planet, it was a blessing yet a curse at the same time. Kohl had to hold his position though at least until Xavier came out with the Golden Age treasure, supposedly it held the location of a former Earth battleship the, 'PES Galactica' (Planet Earth's Ship). Kohls fellow Hunter friend had seemed to be in the fortress for hours, had he been captured? Kohl that for a moment that he should infiltrate the Cabal base to find his friend, but he thought better of it, if Kohl did that he could jeopardize the whole mission. After laying down on the dune of sound for another half-an-hour or so Kohl started to hear alarms sound from the base, "And that's the cue." Kohl muttered to himself. Kohl quickly hoped on the sparrow that had been parked behind him speeding towards the base, and in the flash of an instant the northern wall of the fortress exploded in a gulf of red flame shortly followed by a figure running into the desert. Kohl sped towards the shadowy figure and as soon as he was close enough drifted the sparrow to pull aside Xavier. "Cmon on man, hop on and let's get out of here!". Xavier quickly swung himself into the speeding bike, followed by Kohl doing a quick 180 and flying back towards the desert sun, "So did you get it?" Kohl asked curiously. Xavier reached into a bag to reveal a small book. Their mission had been a success.

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                  • Do you really want it as an anecdote or can it be a short story instead?

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                    • Does the story have to be set at the same time as the picture or can it be told from the past?

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                      • Does that place in the photo have a name? I'm kinda new to this :s

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                        • Edited by Dropship dude: 7/12/2013 11:41:08 PM
                          My time to shine... Just so I'm clear, midnight Bungie time, Sunday, yesh? And it has to be in the style of an anecdote?

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                          • ... :( I...I...I can't write good

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