originally posted in:The Black Garden
I awoke. I had no recollection of who I was or how I had found my way into that dark, lifeless room. I stumble around in a seemingly empty space searching for a switch or a light source. After what seemed like an eternity I found what I was looking for, a lever. It was rusted, and had no intention of moving, but after struggling for maybe five minutes I felt a hand in the darkness. With this persons help I was able to force the lever over and I heard what sounded like a generator powering on. The lights were too bright to see at first and it had taken a few moments for my eyes to adjust. When I could finally process images again I realized I was in what seemed to be a warehouse, it was filled with all kinds of contraptions which were obviously used for war. When I turned to my mysterious friend I was surprised to find that he was not human, but some sort of automaton. He didn't say a word but expressed what I would assume was fear. When I asked him what startled him I was terrified to hear my voice. It wasn't natural, it wasn't organic, it was almost robotic. We left the warehouse together without saying a word to each other and yet again my eyes to adjust to the light. When they did the first thing I noticed was a great sphere hovering over the surface of the earth and I couldn't help but feel I owe my life to it, to protect it until my dying day. I now sit propped against a rock in a large field, thankful to have survived another battle. I look to my right to see my old reliable shotgun, smoke still rising from the barrel. I look to my left to see my old friend praying to the traveller, and I can't help but feel that same emotion of responsibility for that great sphere that I felt the day I awoke from my long, long hibernation.
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I apologize for being slightly over the word limit
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Edited by Voll: 7/13/2013 5:30:57 PMI don't mean to sound rude, but your story doesn't take place in Mars. Check it out, it's needed to participate in the Fan Fiction contest!
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I didn't even look at the picture! Anyway it was fun to write, i probably wasn't gonna win anyway. There are some very talented writers on this forum. Plus I was just trying to make a history for my character
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Don't worry, pal. In fact, I enjoyed your short-story. It really sets the mood for wanting to know more about your Exo. Keep it up!
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Sorry I couldn't put a link, I'm still getting used to the mobile app
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Hey check this out if you interested in the Exo, this person Lazuliv commented on my who are the Exo post. It was some fiction that inspired my story and it was pretty cool
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Thanks man,