originally posted in:The Black Garden
in the second paragraph i am a bit confused about the statement, [quote]One army but could not two. [/quote]
anyways i like it, a story from the ghosts perspective. Definitely unique.
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Edited by Jillybean: 7/15/2013 6:00:22 PMYeah I really could have done with an extra syllable in that sentence. Cheers for the comment! Edit - it means she could defeat one army but the second one got her.
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Edited by Falderal: 7/16/2013 12:33:26 AMgot it