originally posted in:The Black Garden
I do not want any award i should have made this post before but i will do it for fun. Remind me of my days in The Writers Corner.-Commander.
[i]Survivors of the new age[/i]
Wind kicks up the dust in small dust clouds that swirl around in the afternoon light. The empty fortress moans like banshees of legend as winds whip around the buildings . The bones of an era long before of rusted out junk creaks in the wind as a loose door bangs across the empty buildings that lay rusting in the sun.
A dot far off in the sky turns into a ship that gets closer. Not every thing was totally dead here as it had two living resident's. The dog ran out to see what the big object was. It is a short haired golden retriever with a scarf tied around its neck. The caretaker of the dog was a young boy who fallowed along.
The boy was wearing rags yet looked up with wonder at the ship. He shielded his eyes from the high winds as the ship lowered to the surface. Dropped three egg like pods the ship moved on. The eggs hatched before the boys eyes. three strange armored beings before him. Never had he seen such figures in his life.
Each wore different colors. The leader wearing silver like armor who looked around."Keep those eyes peeled." The boy hid under junk when he was scared. He was scared but felt in awe of them. Sand started to move as figures emerged." Contact." Said the female voice dressed in black wearing a red cloak.
Sand revealed Vex jumped out as sand poured off the metal body's, they all attacked the three who fired strange weapons with strange powers at the trio of armored beings. When the Vex were dealt with the boy stepped out as weapons were trained on him." Its a boy ?!" The third said as his dog peeked around the corner of junk."Lets get him then get out of here. Must have been what those faint life signs were." Both survivors fallowed the Guardians to the pick up point. Survivors to the end leaving the bones of the dead behind.
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Authors Note:had to make fixes as i did not realize that it was unclear in areas. Leaving it alone now.
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Great detail!
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Thanks but i want to make it into a full story. It will get awkward(Trying to eat humble pie) if i do win but i will accept. Anyways enjoy i plan on making this a full story. Dogs and Kids are a good combo.