originally posted in:The Black Garden
No action here just an introductory chapter.
Comments welcome!
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Enjoyed it, can't point to any specifics though sorry.
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I really enjoyed this story, the best way i can explain how I feel about it, is that it felt very sanitary and clean, proper. Not gritty like my style, it was very refreshing, the form was clear and made for fluid reading. Depth of character and dialogue made it one of my current Destiny Fan Fictions. Please keep it up, i await more!