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Edited by Stark:
10/19/2013 9:13:56 PM
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Destiny Beta-Key Contest/Giveaway
Hello Destiny community and good day to you.
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Beta Winner!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mr Midas congratulations!
Through the blessing of The Traveler I have been blessed with an extra Beta Key that I plan on give out to one lucky guardian.
Long Story short I got one in an email from my pre order provider after I had gone in and got my printed receipt beta code. I have checked and the two codes are different and unique from each other. I now plan on passing the extra spoils onto you, the Destiny community through a simple contest.
Contest:
The winner will be chosen at random, to be entered into the drawing you need to do three simple things.
1. Follow Me
2. Post a "positive criticism" post on my current story chapters. Spam and troll post will be disregarded and will not be counted as a post.
3. And finally for a little extra incentive, I would like you to write a short story describing a character of your choice, preferable human. I say human because we know very little about the other races. I say this also because the winner will also have their character featured in my next and upcoming chapter and if they are a human it makes it much easier for me to write them in.
The dead line for the Beta Key will be Sunday 8pm Central Time. One week from this Post.
Chapter One:
http://www.bungie.net/7_Tale-of-Two-Strangers-Fan-Fic/en/Forum/Post?id=61670966#referred-Destiny (Destiny)
Chapter Two:
http://www.bungie.net/7_ToTS-Chapter-2-Fates-Intertwined/en/Forum/Post?id=61724763#referred-Destiny (Destiny)
Chapter Three:
http://www.bungie.net/7_Tale-of-Two-Strangers-Fan-Fic/en/Forum/Post?id=61670966#referred-Destiny (Destiny)
Chapter Four:
http://www.bungie.net/7_ToTS-Chapter-Four-Friend-or-Foe/en/Forum/Post?id=61922275#referred-Destiny (Destiny)
Chapter Five:
http://www.bungie.net/7_ToTS-Chapter-5-Ghostly-Past/en/Groups/Post?id=62147025&groupId=39972#referred-
Here are the links to all my chapters so far, have fun and good luck to everyone.
Edit*
Since some people "need" some clarification for the purpose of my three steps I will give them.
1. Following allows you to more easily find my post and threads. After the give away you will have no need to follow me any further and may un-follow.
2. I would much appreciate other people's comments on my chapters thus far so that I may improving them further as the story un folds.
3. I've wanted to do something of this kind for my stories for some time now. What better way then in a contest, kill two birds with one stone.
Doing it this way does more for the Destiny community the just doing a free for all, first come first serve. Those who really want to get into the beta will put forth the little bit of effort I am asking for. Doing it this way I feel levels the playing field for everyone.
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1 ReplyShort story: my farther was a great man before the war and my mother was a doctor who could help any one and would do it no matter if she got paid or not,but this would all change when we got attacked and almost obligated and saved by the travler and I and three others where chosen by the traveler to keep the last city safe while the traveler slept, it gave us extraordinary powers. And we trained other how to tap in to the travelers powers. And we called ourselves the graudians. A Year later we have over a hundred fresh guardians.We decide to build a wall so when we where away our families and loved ones would be safe. We took volunteers which I was in charge of to build the wall. The wall was about finished when we met our first aliens. On day while I was keeping watch with my custom sniper branded closing time I saw four glowing humans running fast I aimed down my scope to see why the where running and behind the where 10/15 four armed humanoid running after then with guns and swords I sounded the alarms and took out two of the four arms guys then jumped down and activated my ability to hover and pull out my assault rifle now called the soul returner and charged when I came up on the glowing humans I realised they where female aliens and they were holding babies,the looked alarmed when saw me sprinting towards them. I yelled to them to keep running that I will help them and more help are on the way. I shoot and killed the first 4 humanoids without them even knowing what happen the the other nine stop and got togother in a group with shields infront and then guns then in back swords I did my best to shoot the guns,but then I hit one of the sword humanoids in the head which fell clean of his shoulders and a white ghostly air shoot out of his neck all of the other humanoids scattered I piped them off on at a time when I got all of them I headed back to the wall to tell the rest of the council what happen. Then I hear an electric buzz go past my eat an feel a crippling pain in my arm that makes me drop. I spuned as I fell and then one of the humanoids was there standing above me with to energy swords, this ones bigger and member then the others.I try to stand up but then he slams his giant foot down on my chest the humanoid starrs to bleeding from the ships knee where his sword hit and his yellow blood drips in my eyes so I can't see I await my death,the all a sudden the weight of his foot is lifted I wipe my eyes and see a grey human fist fighting the giant humanoid I kept wiping my eyes the user that this grey dude is an robot, the the robot climbs the giant twist,grabs the giant withvhis legs and throw him to the dirt. The robot gets up and shoves his hand though the giant chest and pulls out it heart. To be cont.
