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10/19/2013 10:54:09 PM
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Warlock's Way: Broken Edge Part One
It's taken me a long while, but I've finally gotten some story to publish. This is part one of Warlock's Way: Broken Edge, the story of the warlock Kurandal. This is the first major story writing I've done in close to fourteen years, so I appreciate any feedback and suggestions from the group. I know I have a long way to go in improving my skills.
Thanks in advance to anyone who reads my take on Bungie's new universe.
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2 RepliesEdited by Jinxer31: 10/20/2013 12:49:35 AMThat was really great, where did you come up with the other language? It seems kind of familiar. Criticism K seems to be scary powerful personally I find that to create a boring story as he just needs to get pissed and flatten his enemies with his magic. It may just be me but I like to read about a character who is relatable(not literally!) and human. It was still a brilliant read so please keep writing!
