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Edited by Plain Ben:
3/8/2014 6:48:41 AM
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Throw Art Critique at Me.
Image not the focus, check the links below.
Basically, I'm at this point now where I feel like I'm not improving much at all, if at all.
I'd like some recommendations on what I need to work on, where and how to improve, whether it's to do with my skills or even if you just don't like a certain bit about a design, I'd love to hear any feedback. You can find my work below:
[url=http://plainben.tumblr.com/][b]PlainBen.Tumblr.com[/b][/url]
[[url=http://31.media.tumblr.com/d3cb03dce63150dc1a2867c216d281ed/tumblr_n1ddy2zyA41ttdtqgo1_1280.jpg]Overall Art Progress[/url]]
*Sneaky update of OP Image*
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Edited by Jaaake AU: 2/22/2014 7:01:16 AMI only do photography at university, so I'm not much help when it comes to meaningful critique of stuff like this. However, [url=http://plainben.tumblr.com/post/77355490402/unfinished-wip-of-a-jet-biker-cyberpunk-and-scene]this one here[/url] is a bit odd. The chest proportions in contrast to the rest of the body seems a little off. Other than that, the rest is pretty solid. You definitely have talent, so keep up the good work!
