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Edited by Plain Ben:
3/8/2014 6:48:41 AM
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Throw Art Critique at Me.
Image not the focus, check the links below.
Basically, I'm at this point now where I feel like I'm not improving much at all, if at all.
I'd like some recommendations on what I need to work on, where and how to improve, whether it's to do with my skills or even if you just don't like a certain bit about a design, I'd love to hear any feedback. You can find my work below:
[url=http://plainben.tumblr.com/][b]PlainBen.Tumblr.com[/b][/url]
[[url=http://31.media.tumblr.com/d3cb03dce63150dc1a2867c216d281ed/tumblr_n1ddy2zyA41ttdtqgo1_1280.jpg]Overall Art Progress[/url]]
*Sneaky update of OP Image*
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Edited by Remo: 2/25/2014 8:28:53 AMI see good improvement with human anatomy and proportions, but I suggest perfecting the preliminary blocking and form of the person before going into detail. I do timed observational sketches as practice to help encourage me to get the proper stance down first. I also noticed, but struggle to put into words, is that some images seem to lack... Depth. I'm no quite sure what it is, but some concepts somehow it seem flat. Your lighting is fine, so is color: cloth work, overlapping as well; I can't quite put my finger on the cause of it. Excellent work
