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Edited by Plain Ben:
3/8/2014 6:48:41 AM
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Throw Art Critique at Me.
Image not the focus, check the links below.
Basically, I'm at this point now where I feel like I'm not improving much at all, if at all.
I'd like some recommendations on what I need to work on, where and how to improve, whether it's to do with my skills or even if you just don't like a certain bit about a design, I'd love to hear any feedback. You can find my work below:
[url=http://plainben.tumblr.com/][b]PlainBen.Tumblr.com[/b][/url]
[[url=http://31.media.tumblr.com/d3cb03dce63150dc1a2867c216d281ed/tumblr_n1ddy2zyA41ttdtqgo1_1280.jpg]Overall Art Progress[/url]]
*Sneaky update of OP Image*
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Edited by Plain Ben: 3/8/2014 6:48:33 AMMay as well formally update, with this study of a crossbowman, mainly focusing on the metals. I've read through every comment, and re-read them several times. I tried to keep a sense of depth, render different materials (as opposed to it all looking plasticy), kept the majority of detail and the focal point, and less around the edges. Probably needs a bit more work on the legs...
