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Sorry for the delay, but here is Chapter 13. The biggest chapter yet. Both in length and plot content. Enjoy the read and thank you for the feedback.
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Most definitely your biggest (best) chapter yet. I half saw that little bout of infighting coming though I thought it would take a few more word between them. Tharsos' fury is a dangerous thing no matter its target isn't it? Lukos ever the loner; only natural for [i]him[/i] to have an issue with being saved. The teams' retreat worked out rather well thanks to the 'turn and fire' moments. Now it's obvious the Fallen Admiral set Lukos up as part of a trap, but how has his rescue affected the plan? How will these events impact the team going forward? How will Lukos repay everyone for saving his ungrateful hide? Does Sideros view Tharsos any differently after this risky rescue mission? Please tell me something will be answered next time.