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originally posted in:Writers Corner
4/3/2014 10:33:29 AM
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Only The Blind Deserve
some shitty folk songs about my ex, all the song titles are places where, me, her, and my buddies(who are now long gone), would get drunk and hang out. tempe town lake is the last place me and my dad had a real genuine time with each other.
feedback would be appreciated, thanks to anyone who listens.
English
#Offtopic
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Needs more keyboard in my opinion. But hey, it's your music, and I don't know hoopla about making sounds that sound nice.
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Kind of like a folk Johnny Rotten. You have a lot of potential.
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lighten those strum patterns both in tempo and pressure. Too much twang from the strings not enough resonating sound. Plus for the proper folk feel (especially a song about an ex) I feel like you need to slow it up a bit.
