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Part of Nora's story, the twenty second to be precise. These links have yet to fail!
Spoiler below, comments appreciated
[spoiler]“Corporal, Miss Sheol would like to speak with you shall I sent her back?” Axton asked over the speakers.
“Go right ahead,” I answered the empty room.
I looked up from the feathered sniper to see the door glide open and the blue skinned Alicia walked in. Something was different this time; I didn’t feel the odd edge that had hung over me on her ship, I was much more at ease. Because of that I was allowed a moment to study her, aside from her blue skin she had stark white hair that ended at her shoulders and colorless eyes that seemed to glow; I couldn’t remember what she had worn when I pulled Isabel on her but now she had on a long navy blue coat with shining threads of silver spaced evenly throughout, the collar stopped roughly at her eye line and had a thick silver border, I could see some light gray armor plates around her neckline that descended into the coat, like Rexford she had two bandolier style belts intersecting over her chest though unlike him she wore them over her coat, affixed to the clothing’s midsection was a third belt that holstered a pair of blocky pistols with oversized magazines jutting from their grips, her feet were encased by more of the armor plates, she held her hands behind her back.
“You’re not going to make another attempt on my life again are you?” She still smiled as she joked about what had occurred.
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[url=http://www.bungie.net/7_Nora-Artemis-Sinclair-1-10/en/Forum/Post?id=62061583#referred-NORA]Parts 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20 and 21.[/url]
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I love the way you write... Your descriptions are beautifully vivid and move my emotions waay to easy.