Was bored and wrote something up in a couple of minutes... just want to get some reactions.
Thanks! All comments, good or bad, help :)
They are coming: Part 1
A strong wind passed and pushed me, ever so slightly. My ghost hovered off in the distance, scanning something I probably had no interest in. "What are you scanning, get over here."
"I found something, but my database has no information surrounding the item. I only know - "
I cut him off, something was happening, "That doesn't matter right now, get back inside my head. I think we have a situation".
The tiny miracle of a machine skipped a beat and then raced right back to me. His physical body evaporated as his voice filled my mind, "What's happening?". Right; I had forgotten that his contextual audio sensors had been practically annihilated in a recent encounter. The fallen may not have good aim, but they definitely can get lucky.
"I don't know, but I've got a bad feeling and I think I heard something. What's our position?".
"We are currently located... hold on." After a short pause he continued, "my access to information has been cut off, and my sensors are indicating movement to what a large percentage of my current calculations call East."
A noise confirmed the accuracy of his calculations. I swung to my right and lifted my Shingen. My scope provided me with a healthy range while maintaining the accuracy of the firearm at it's max distance.
"Those aren't fallen", Delphi whispered, almost as if to caution me into silence.
I took two steps back and rolled behind a nearby rock.
He was right, and I could even check the Cabal and Vex off the list, this was something totally different...
I finished part two, this will be a slow production haha, I'm so busy :O
Part 2: http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/71302441
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white flag brigade supports you - http://www.bungie.net/en/Clan/Detail/449658
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I read the title I knew the unicorns were coming!!! Yes!!!
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Posted part 2! http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/71302441
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Edited by RicochetMKXV: 10/2/2014 6:45:39 PM
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Great job! I would love to see a section devoted to fan fiction so that everyone's work would be easier to find and not lost in the chatter. I appreciate these lighthearted alternative story lines.
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999999999999 times better than the story we got. Props to you, someone give this guy/gal a cookie Also, Hyper-Bump
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"... scanning something I probably had no interest in." Best part of the whole thing! I like it so far.
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Very nice
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Worth a bump
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Just keep writing. :-)
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write a book for bungie
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Nice opening. Do the rest but cautiously ;-)
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Good Job, I'm certainly intrigued. Not to state the obvious but you were implying that the Hive were the ones incoming right?
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I loves this, keep going!
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Bump?