Three guardians on Old Russia sitting inside of an old Pre Golden Age building staring at the campfire in front of them.
Titan: So, what are we doing in here anyway?
Warlock: Holding position, and awaiting for orders from the tower.
Titan: So we are doing nothing?
Hunter: Pretty much.
Warlock: No!, we are holding position and awaiting for orders!
Titan: And exactly when will those orders come?
Warlock: They where supposed to arrive 3 hours ago . . .
Hunter: Great, so we are alone in the middle of this storm, with low resources and no communication with the tower, could it be worse?
*The fire goes out*
Titan: You asked for it.
Hunter: Shut up or i will Golden Gun you.
Warlock: I'm sure that's grammatically incorrect.
Hunter: No it isn't.
Titan: I'm pretty sure it is.
Hunter: No, its NOT!
Warlock: Yes it is.
*Hunter trows himself onto the warlock and start fighting*
Hunter: Correct me one more time you glorified Tinkerbell!!
*Warlock puts himself on top*
Warlock: Well at least I'm not a Red Riding Hood spin-off !!!
Hunter: Don't you even dare!!!
*Hunter takes down warlock and keep fighting*
*Warlocks ghost materializes*
WGhost: What's going on?
Titan: They are fighting.
WGhost: Again?, anyways, in coming transmission from the tower.
Commander Zavala: Guardians there's a report of enemy movement in the area, i need you to investigate, the coordinates are encrypted and send to your ghost.
*Warlock and Hunter stand up and tidy up their armors*
Warlock: We have job to do!, let's go.
WGhost: So who was winning?
Warlock: That's none of your business.
WGhost: So the Hunter?
Warlock: Get back in. . .
*Warlocks ghost disappears*
Hunter: So, where to?
Warlock: Towards the North.
Titan: But there's nothing there.
Hunter: There's snow and trees!
*Titan punches him in the head*
Titan: You retarded Dreg.
*Hunter rubs his head*
Hunter: Well you don't have to offend me you know?
Warlock: Cut it out you two!, we need to start moving!
*Hunter and Titan start dancing*
Warlock: I feel the need of Nova Bombing you so hard . . .
Hunter: That's not a real word. . .
*They go out of the building heading towards the coordinates, while fading into the storm*
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Part 2:
http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/79031133/0/0/1
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This is pretty good if your under 18. Not up to par with other fanfics, though. I'm not saying its bad but it just seems like it was written by a kid based mostly off the immature behavior of the characters. If your young then keep it up, your writing will progress with practice. If your an older gentleman I'd suggest leaving the lore to the devs. Just my 2¢ anyway.