Hey guys, this is my first time doing anything like this, I hope you like it. Any constructive criticism is welcome. If you guys like it, I hope to do more with these characters. I'd like to loosely follow the story of the original game, just embellished a bit. It's a bit of a long read, but I think it's worth it. Thanks for reading! :) (Also, sorry that it has to be linked, it's too long to fit in less than a million forum posts, and that's just a hassle. For both you and me.) [url]https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Aqsp02IvYmD70eWHhOmrflxscWpJ9PIHuImKh33pYM8/edit?usp=sharing[/url] [EDIT] Working on Part 2. I will post a link in this thread when it's done, but I'd appreciate a like or bump in the dedicated thread when it appears. Thanks. :) [EDIT] Here's Part 2: http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/81390687