[b]Epilogue[/b]
Lakshmi-2 walked into the corpse-littered ravine, where the Fallen lay limbless and poked full of holes. Where she didn’t see the dead, she saw ash. It was smeared along the bloodied grass and broken bark. It seemed the Saints did a thorough job. She wouldn’t have come back here, but the Inner Circle…they wanted a particular piece of armor belonging to Saint-14.
Her Ghost made sure no one was still wandering this area and she continued on. The Ketch was thankfully abandoned. She did not have the inner strength to fight more today, even though she was a machine. Future War Cult had driven her to so much death that it was a wonder she was still in control of her sanity.
She made to the field before the Ketch, where the bodies were thickest and a dark figure knelt.
The strange creature, hooded and seemingly oblivious to her presence, kept working. It held a small device in its hand, scanning something over and over again. A faint glow illuminated Saint-14's mangled, metallic body and the plumes of his helmet.
"Stop, fiend!" ordered Lakshmi, drawing her hand cannon.
The figure kept scanning. “My movements are not fully under my own control,” it said, voice deep and distorted. He looked up to reveal almond-shaped eyes of the brightest gold. Sentient grey tendrils sprouted from his face and swiped the air. “Is it different for you?”
Lakshmi didn’t respond.
Was she imagining this?
"Well I must depart, Lakshmi-2," it said, standing.
He moved his hand and a dark portal formed in the air behind him, so black it was blacker than the wilderness night sky. He stepped inside and tucked the scanning device into the folds of his shroud.
"Who are you?" she managed to ask.
The creature looked back. “I am Xur, Agent of the Nine.”
[b]End[/b]
[b]This ending was inspired by a suggestion made from a Guardian by the name of Poohdib.
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[b][url=http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/90052905/0/0/1]EPISODE ONE[/url][/b]
[b][url=http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/90406891]EPISODE TWO[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/90776215/0/0/1]EPISODE THREE[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/91176944/0/0/1]EPISODE FOUR[/url]
[url=http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/91747434?lc=1033]EPISODE FIVE[/url][/b]
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Damn good read, should make more exo titan stories, they are my favorite. (Defender titan exo myself if you couldn't tell) was a bit short, but I'm glad I got to read a bit about saint-14!!
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And that folks is how Xur got the Saint-14 to sell
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Edited by SwordOwl: 1/31/2015 3:57:01 AMThis was a very well-written story. I am an Exo Titan (my only class ever since the Beta) and I got the Helm the first time Xur was selling it (week 3 or 4 I believe). It has the most useful ability in my opinion and is the only Titan armor linked to a significant figure that we know nothing about. So thank you for the good read. P.S. idk if you know, but there is a Rare Titan helmet that tells more of Saint-14. I don't have my ps4 with me, but I think it said something about Saint-14 strangling the Kell of one of the Fallen Houses. Edit: Nevermind. You got it right [b] Arihant Type 4 (helmet)(Rare):[/b] [i]"A story of Saint-14 holds that, when grappling with a great Kell, he caved in the Fallen's head with one blow from his own."[/i]
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Please... Write more...
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You should try and make a story about obsidian mind, ruin wings or that spider helmet hunters have!
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Will we be getting a short story about the nine?
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*YYYAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWNNNN* oh, sorry. Think I dozed off there...
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And yet, it seems like ages since xur sold that helmet
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In your stories the warlocks never self ress however, In the game all they ever do is self ress.
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So 12 of them died when it takes 3 guardians to defeat a baron and kell
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Need a story about Ikora Rey or Osiris
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Just finished and I loved the story! Kinda confused on why they were fighting the fallen and not that concordant faction, but still amazin. Great work
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Just read through all of them, that was truly great man! Loved it!
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The only disappointing part was that I expected the saints to get revenge on concordant. Otherwise keep up the good work
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seriously can't stress how great these all are. I look forward to every single thing you post.
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I've finally read ALL of your fan-fiction and my god they are amazing, these finally make me want to be in the world of destiny after my inspiration blew out after the game fell short of expectations
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Ahhh i was waiting for this banter to unfold. Looking forward to the next one :)
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Wow that was pretty damn cool to read.
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Such creativity! I love the writing style, your sentence variation is very pleasing to me. I read all of Toland, Light and Fury, and just finished the Saint 14 series. If you keep writing like that, I'm never going to finish my homework lol
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I loved the part with Xur scanning his helm, that's such a great ending and a good insight to how the Nine might replicate Exotic gear, and why the gear itself isn't color changeable with shaders. A very well done story, I love how the story fit perfectly with the lore too!
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i read all of your episodes of this story, you are fantastic! it would be amazing if you did a story like this for the armor and weapons that didnt get a great story. keep it up, your great!
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Hey man i just have to say that you're stories are really cool. It takes courage and a lot of creativity to put this out there and I commend you for it. Your vivid details and literacy are captivating. Great job, and thank you.
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I got the stats ready. just PM me an email. This site won't allow more than 400 characters
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I am thinking of writing a fanfic crossover with Saint-14 as a main character. I would like to ask if I may use some of the details from your story to make it more realistic.
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That was the best twist ending ever!