Critique my latest creation!

It's very short ATM, but that will change soon. I generally make electronic music, but I've decided to explore different types of genres and came up with this. This track was inspired by Halo themed music. I'm still working on it, but I uploaded a small section of it. I will try and upload the whole track when it's complete. Also, The track isn't finalized. Meaning it lacks mastering and proper EQ'ing. So, it can sound a little too clustered ATM. This will change when its complete.