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Edited by gwillis3454:
4/27/2013 1:21:21 AM
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Work in progress... Any Suggestions?
I've been working on this piece for a while, still have to get the graphics right but eventually I will finish the side of the spaceship. In case you haven't noticed, I combined two of my favorite pieces of concept art and re-created them. Please tell me what you think I could do to improve this.
- thanks!
Gary Willis
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2 RepliesIt's looking pretty cool so far, I look forward to seeing ti finished. As for critique, I think the lights in the control panel are a bit much and I think the composition is a little awkward. Try thinking about the rule of thirds; it's not the only factor in composition (particularly where you have a lot of lights and contrast) but I think it might help playing with the position of things.
