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Edited by gwillis3454:
4/27/2013 1:21:21 AM
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Work in progress... Any Suggestions?
I've been working on this piece for a while, still have to get the graphics right but eventually I will finish the side of the spaceship. In case you haven't noticed, I combined two of my favorite pieces of concept art and re-created them. Please tell me what you think I could do to improve this.
- thanks!
Gary Willis
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1 ReplyEdited by xgeua: 5/3/2013 5:38:13 AMI really like the idea behind this. It looks great so far. Just a few things though: -The earth's edge should be higher about two thirds up the page. -I reckon the glass canopy outline should be just lower than the edge of the earth and less curved. -I think the traveler would look better in the middle. -Straighten and refine some of the edges. They look a bit soft. -Give the earth a bit more blue. Hope this helps.
