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Edited by Plain Ben:
3/8/2014 6:48:41 AM
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Throw Art Critique at Me.
Image not the focus, check the links below.
Basically, I'm at this point now where I feel like I'm not improving much at all, if at all.
I'd like some recommendations on what I need to work on, where and how to improve, whether it's to do with my skills or even if you just don't like a certain bit about a design, I'd love to hear any feedback. You can find my work below:
[url=http://plainben.tumblr.com/][b]PlainBen.Tumblr.com[/b][/url]
[[url=http://31.media.tumblr.com/d3cb03dce63150dc1a2867c216d281ed/tumblr_n1ddy2zyA41ttdtqgo1_1280.jpg]Overall Art Progress[/url]]
*Sneaky update of OP Image*
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2 RepliesOn this drawing, the proportions look good, maybe a little off on the right, but not bad at all. It helps to sometimes use yourself as a reference if you're not sure on something. As for your lighting and shading, I like it. All these concepts you are drawing are awesome, and I'm admittedly kinda jealous. One recurring theme I'm seeing though, is that all of them are just standing there, as if they are just on display. My advice is to go further, draw them doing something! Epic backgrounds and cool moves can help show off the character even more.
