originally posted in:The Black Garden
This is a short story following my character's origins before he appears in Colonel Aloki's story, My Destiny. Hope you enjoy!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PIlnONfrJnA6NXujq8VMAfnJ1XeAZo7rAOpocuECHv8/edit?usp=sharing
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Good storyline, with a nice dash of humor! The pacing is a bit fast, but other than that, I think it's a good read.