originally posted in:The Black Garden
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AOs38JkpoYjajPFeVKO3MBlotXWbv7LD3cYfNtq-gss/edit?usp=sharing
Hopefully this works..
This is the result of multitasking between talking over xbox and watching a movie... Hope it's good/decent/bearable.
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Good story, just some mistakes in grammar. The First Shadowy Thief said that he would fix that for us, so no worries. And I like how Spec is telling the story.
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If you're concerned about grammar, check out DarkBandit1's thread about editing. I'm sure he would be happy to do some for you.
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Need to make available for public view, before we can read it!