originally posted in:The Black Garden
Well ladies and gentlemen, it is finally here. I apologies for it taking so long but I have finally got part 7 up. Hope you enjoy!
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good story man good job
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Awesome story, man. I think this was the best yet. You implemented action into the story so well. Can't wait for part 8!
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Edited by Tilted the Wolf: 5/14/2013 9:25:41 PMDo I have to remind you every time?
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Another good read. Continuing a good job on making the image come to life. Still excited to see what happens within the Vex Stronghold.
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Great chapter. Very good combat writing. I felt like I was in the field with you. Ill hopefully have my Operation Thunderstorm perspective out tomorrow.