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originally posted in:The Black Garden
Edited by SaviorsBlood: 6/12/2015 8:32:58 PM
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Shachal - Chapter 14: Trust

Again, sorry for the delay. Usually I get a chapter out once a week, but lately it's been over two weeks at a time. I finally got this one out though. Enjoy chapter 14. Feedback is appreciated. If you prefer Microsoft OneDrive for viewing click [url=https://onedrive.live.com/redir?resid=FF56932EF0AC1B65%21165]here[/url]. [url=http://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/63746321]Shachal Collection[/url] For more on this story, please join and follow [url=https://www.bungie.net/en/Clan/Detail/1047016]Fireteam Shachal[/url]. Thank you for reading!

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  • [b]Announcement: Chapter 14 is revised.[/b]

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  • Nice; we're getting some more development between Selena and Tharsos, though Lukos's loner attitude isn't going to be helpful and then there's that little vote of confidence at the end for Tharsos. I really want to see how the team works going forward.

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    • Great chapter, excellent depth in conversations between characters. Fascinating ending (won't say to avoid spoilers), I wonder where this will lead Sachal down the road. I have confidence Tharsos' thoughts about the one particular member will prove to be surprising to all.

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