The rings of Saturn chapter 1 part 1 ( Destiny CAFF )

Hello guys this is my first fan fiction about a war going on in the rings of Saturn. Please leave comments below (good or bad) but mostly enjoy! "Ghost set course for Venus Zavala wants me to do a patrol at the Ember caves apparently there's heavy fallen activity". (Ghost)-You got it Cozmo. (Ghost)-Entering hyperspace now. (Cozmo)- good, orbit Venus until I'm suited up. (Ghost)-ok. Cozmo walked to the back to suit up finding his favorite helmet the helmet of Saint 14 he found it himself just outside the walls on Earth. As he slipped it on his one way VISR roared to life making odd mechanical noises in the process. He slipped on his new FWC boots and chest plate and then slipped on his iron banner grips that he won in the tournament. He grabbed his favorite weapon Suros Regime and clicked it onto his back. (Cozmo) alright I think I'm ready, ghost put us down at the old outpost,where we linked my sparrow. (Ghost)-alright trying to find the coordinates....... Found them! Alright we will touch down in 15 seconds, I suggest you si... (Cozmo)- yeah yeah yeah I know the drill. Cozmo sat down and strapped himself in. (Cozmo)-umm ok I'm... The ship engines roared to life immediately and the ship made its way toward the outpost. A few seconds later he could see the outpost they were about a mile away. (Ghost)- alright were dropping in 3..2..1.. The sun burned Cozmos eyes, he put his hand above his eyes so his eyes could adjust, a few seconds later he took out his ghost and summoned his sparrow. (Ghost)-I'm detecting heavy fallen activity,Zavala was right it's coming from the Ember caves! (Cozmo)- well let's see what they're up to. After just getting on his sparrow he could see 5 vandals 1 dreg and 3 shanks. He got off his sparrow immediately and took his weapon off his back. He fired 3 rounds taking out a vandal. He then threw a grenade taking out the shanks and the dreg,He ran at the remaining vandals full speed and shoulder charged one, sending it flying into another one. He turned around to see a knife about to hit him he ducked and grabbed the vandals arm and used all his strength to push up on the vandals elbow. He broke the vandals arm making it screech in agony, he turned around and threw the broken vandal over him. Cozmo looked down at the vandal, the vandal screamed as he was punched to death. (Cozmo)- WHOS NEXT The vandals exchanging looks with eachother then ran off in fear, only to be gunned down anyway. (Cozmo)- well let's get to the ember caves. Cozmo hopped on his sparrow and took a right then a left. He could see the entry leading to the caves. He then was about 40 feet away when. (Cozmo)- I hear gunfire and lots of it. (Ghost)- there's 7 guardians down! He drove through the entry and about 5 feet in he couldn't believe what he saw. Tons of Guardians fighting 6 devil walkers and lots of fallen, people screaming and being sniped down. Fallen screeching As there heads were popped spilling ether. he was observing the battlefield in awe, once he got out of his state of pure disbelief he saw a walker looking right at him. (Cozmo)- OH NO!! The walker fired and the shot hit 3 feet away from him and Cozmo was sent flying. And when he hit the ground Cozmo fell into deep blackness So what did you guys think? Leave a comment below! Edit:here's a link to part 2 https://www.bungie.net/en/Forum/Post/149688226/0/0