The Rings of Saturn Chapter 1 part 3(chapter finale)

Hello guys this is my 3rd installment of my new and only series The Rings of Saturn. So please leave a comment below (bad or good) but for the most part please enjoy! (Cayde)- Sooo...Zavala, you want to tell me WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED! Cayde slammed his hands on the table leaving a giant fracture in it. (Cozmo)- Well there was a li... (Cayde)- CAN IT CARROT! I want to hear it from the Commander himself. (Cozmo)- Carrot? Cayde turned slowly staring into Zavalas blank eyes. Zavala then looked up and said.. "we will discuss this later." (Cayde)- NO ZAVALA WERE DISCUSSING IT RIGHT NOW! YOU GET ONE OF MY HUNTERS INVOLVED YOU TELL ME!! (Zavala)- Cayde I'm sorry, Cozmo come with me. Zavala and Cozmo started walking out of the hall of guardians. (Cayde)-DONT WALK OUT OF THIS ROOM ZAVALA!...... damn it! (Cozmo)- So what's the problem? (Zavala)- Well a guardian went dark yesterday while exploring the rings around Saturn, it didn't sound to good. I need you to investigate, see what happened. (Cozmo)- Can I hear the comm message? (Zavala)- Yes, this way. Zavala lead him through the hangar to Amanda Holiday. (Amanda)- Hello commander, hello Cozmo, What can I do for ya? (Zavala)- The message we got from Jato. (Amanda)- Oh, uh...let me go get it. Amanda stood up and took a right into the back room, and a few minutes later she came out with a black drive that had glowing blue hieroglyphs on it. (Amanda)- Here it is, I think.... She put it in a plug and the message came to life. (Message)- *static*.....*Pttttt*.... Hello hello? Is this thing on? Hmm ok well uh hello this is Warlock Jato Ive been exploring the rings for some time now, and I have found traces of movement. My scanners show that there's something large orbiting around the ring, it's about the size of Mercury. And whatever it is it keeps sending me transmissions that sounds like a whole lot of breathing and static. But I have also found that the Cabal have several outposts orbiting Saturn. There not easy to get to but I think a good flyer could make it through. (Message)-A loud roar came from the back of Jatos ship. What in the hell! Did you hear that ghost?......ghost? Hmm...... Jato turned around to see a large white figure, it crushed Jatos ghost in his giant hand. His three giant bright bright blue eyes gleamed right in front of Jatos face. Oh my.... The giant white knight grabbed him by his neck swiftly. (Jato)- NO PLEASE NO NO NOOOOOOOO!! Jato struggled to breathe, he squirmed and tried to free the Knights grip on his neck with his hands. The choking went on for about thirty seconds and then it ended with a loud "thump." The Knight stepped on the back of Jatos unmoving body, the sound of bones crunching echoed throughout the ship. The foot steps got louder as the Knight walked closer to the comm. finally the foot steps stopped but with the dark deep cracking voice of the Knight. THE KING HUNGERS FOR YOUR LIGHT! HE IS COMING FOR YOU GUARDIANS. *pttt* *static* Three minutes passed by, (Amanda)-That's too bad he was a nice guy and that was the finest ship I've ever built. Amanda walked away muttering "what a waste" and a other few things. Cozmo stared at Zavala and then said- (Cozmo)- I'll be ready to go in the morning but I think I'll need a team. (Zavala)- Well...who do you want? (Cozmo)- Hmm...Caroline and Hannah. (Zavala)- Okay I'll have them both ready to go early. But I'll have to find a way to get Caroline patched up. (Cozmo)- Just send them to me whenever they're ready I won't be sleeping tonight. (Zavala)- Okay I will have them ready as soon as I can. Zavala started to walk away when Cozmo stopped him in his tracks. (Cozmo)- This time tell Ikora and Cayde. (Zavala)- I will.... So how did you guys like it please leave a comment below! Sorry it was kinda short but the next one will be a lot longer and action packed. And let's just say the ships will be very useful :) Edit: Just revamped the whole message! thanks for the help with the revamping RoyalBlade!