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Bump for reads!
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That's nice ! Can we expect a sequel ?
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Edited by Onyx076: 3/15/2015 2:34:24 AMJust finished chapter 3, like I said, your idea is original and solid, but it's not Destiny. That's all, your writing is fine, so don't think it's your style. Maybe for your next story, aim for something Destiny related.